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Sheer Cold - A White Nuzlocke Pt. 22

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UPDATE: Fixed some cut-off panels and added a small flashback scene I forgot~

I could start off every Writer's Comments with a remark on how long it's been since the last update... :'D

Anyway, Sheer Cold's 3rd anniversary is soon and I couldn't go without at least updating! There'll be a lot other special events too, since I totally slept through (?) the last one!

Trivia:
-This update is so friggin long, but cutting it in half seemed unappropriate. I'll stick to shorter updates from now on, hope nobody ever minded the difference :V
-I finally decided to sketch before I line. Turns out the pages come out tidier and anatomy is slightly better! 
-I'm terribly awkward with English Sound Effects. I don't seem to get the hang of it like native English speakers do, so please bear with those awkward zium and pshyuu's.
-The Pidove who attacked Gustav was my "first catch" in Pinwheel Forest! Funnily, I used Gustav against it, and ultimately killed it. Ha.
-If you wonder what happened to Gustav in-game: HE GOT BOXED. Why am I going through all this trouble of making up a whole story about him? For developing other characters, of course!
-A major reason I never made Felicia actually fight Cheren in-comic is because his Pidove,which he had early in the game, wasn't supposed to be there yet. Also I didn't want to portray Felicia as the genius kid who beats her supposedly very clever rival-friend one time after another. In this comic, Cheren is overall better in battling than Felicia is. Yep.
-AMOREEEEE!!!!! I wanted to make her sensitivity to feelings(/love) both her strength and weakness. She is usually a very very sweet Swoobat who cares about and pep-talks her friends, but when she feels betrayed or if someone acts unaccordingly to her moral standards, she gets unreasonable and in the worst case, even violent. She may seem like a selfish biatch in times like these, but she has her reasons. Please still love her.
-That stuff flying around in the desert wind adds a lot to the Shoujo effect somehow, haha.
-Subtle reference to the in-game mechanic where you can't change the Pokemon's nickname when you got it from another person. I think it's sweet.

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ShiguKun's avatar
GUSTAAAAV yo'ure kind of a dick but I'm too happy you're still alive to care